This Blog is for showcasing my art work from works in progress to finished pieces.
Monday, July 19, 2010
The Road WIP
Here is what I have so far. This is for the Gnomon Workshop contest this month. Please leave any crits or comments that you feel could make this better.
But I think we should be seeing more of the underside of that bridge. The perspective is at a tricky angle yes, but looking at the trees and the slope of the hill, I feel the bridge needs to be rotated some as well. It feels like it's fighting the perceptive/angle it needs to be at.
Here is what I have so far. This is for the Gnomon Workshop contest this month. Please leave any crits or comments that you feel could make this better.
This is pretty cool!
ReplyDeleteBut I think we should be seeing more of the underside of that bridge. The perspective is at a tricky angle yes, but looking at the trees and the slope of the hill, I feel the bridge needs to be rotated some as well. It feels like it's fighting the perceptive/angle it needs to be at.